12th ERWC Fall 2015 Per. 1 & 2 Assignments

Instructor
Mrs. Sheri Zoratti
Term
Fall 2015
Department
English
Description

English 4P ~ ERWC (Expository Reading and Writing Course) Syllabus

 

Instructor: Mrs. Zoratti                    Room: 120

Email: [email protected]     Website: santiagohs.org

 

COURSE DESCRIPTION

 

The ERWC course is designed specifically to help prepare students for the rigorous demands of reading and writing in the first year of college and beyond.  This course has a heavy emphasis on the rhetorical thinking, writing, speaking, and reading of expository texts and literature that are predominant in postsecondary schools. 

 

Students will work on acquiring skills for reading with comprehension and enthusiasm, listening with understanding and compassion, speaking with conviction and effect, and writing with clarity and persuasion in a variety of genres.  This course emphasizes that while what we read is important, how we read is critical as well.

 

Course Goals

  • Meet the standards of the English Placement Test
  • Meet the expectations of college and university faculty
  • Meet the California College and Career Readiness Standards
  • Develop literacy skills critical to lifelong participation in the worlds of work and community

 

Instruction

Much of the analysis completed in this course will be student-centered, meaning each student will be responsible for his/her own learning.  Students will be required to speak in pairs, small groups, or to the class as a whole on a regular basis.

 

Attendance

Students will be expected to be in class and on time daily.   The school tardy policy will be strictly enforced.   

         

Late Work

Homework: Homework and other small formative assignments intended for practice and/or to prepare you for class the next day are due on time (no credit for late work).  

 

Semester 1: Large formative assignments (such as packets or journals) and summative assignments will be accepted up to 5 days late with a deduction of 10% per day.  This policy applies to first semester only.  

 

Semester 2: It is time to behave like college students, which means no late work will be accepted. 

 

Note: If a Summative assignment has an announced due date, you are required to deliver it to the instructor on time (email or drop off) or will receive a grade deduction for each day it is late. 

 

Make-Up Work

Each of these requirements will be strictly followed:

  • Assignments given to a student before an absence are due upon return.                                 
  • Assignments missed due to absence will have one day for every day of excused absence.
  • Responsibility for making up work and tests rests with the student, not the teacher.  Check the website to find out what you missed.                                  

 

Grading

This course is based on a point/percentage system.  The grades are weighted as follows:

 

40%- Formative Assessments (class work, homework, discussions, independent/group work, journals/notebook, informal presentations, quizzes)

60%- Summative Assessments (process and on-demand essays, tests, projects, and formal presentations)

 

 

 

Class Materials

Students are responsible for supplying the following material:

  • 3-Ring Notebook with standard lined paper for note taking & writing assignments
  • Blue or black pens that write clearly plus additional colors for revision
  • Highlighters (2+ colors)

 

LEARNING ACTIVITIES AND ASSESSMENTS

 

 Reading: You will read a variety of texts (essays, articles, etc.) and analyze their main ideas, purposes, and effectiveness.  You will be assessed with writing assignments, quizzes, projects, and presentations. 

 

 Research: You will draw information from a variety of sources and you will be assessed for the depth, variety, and appropriateness of informational sources used.

 

 Process Writing: You will pre-write, draft, and revise essays that analyze information and make claims based upon that analysis.  Writing will be assessed, in part, based on clarity of your thesis, use of effective rhetorical structure, correct grammar and usage, and appropriate supporting claims/citations.

 

 On-Demand Writing: You will also write unrevised, timed essays that will be assessed based on clarity of your thesis, use of effective rhetorical structure, correct grammar and usage, and appropriate supporting claims/citations.  You will also frequently engage in journal writing or “quickwrites” to share your ideas on a subject.

 

 Projects and Presentations: You will prepare and present individual and small-group projects and presentations that will be assessed on clarity, subject knowledge, relevance, and presentation skills (eye contact, elocution, body language, etc.).

 

 Participation: You will engage in class participation on a regular basis, including class discussions, debates, and Socratic Seminars.  You will also participate in peer reviews of writing with response rubrics.

 

ADDITIONAL IMPORTANT INFORMATION

 

Academic integrity

Plagiarism is defined as the act of using another person’s words or ideas as if they were your own.  During this course, you will often need to use outside sources within your work; when you do so, you must acknowledge the original author or source following standard scholarly practice, such as MLA citation.  The penalties for plagiarism range from a reprimand to an F in the course.

 

A final note about class conduct

This course necessarily involves a great deal of class participation in the form of individual contributions, class discussion, and small group work and conversation. I will expect us all to conduct ourselves in ways that are respectful to one another and to the general goals of this course. We should come to class prepared to talk, write, and think about the subject of the course, and be sure we are not distracted by cell phones, text messaging, iPods/head phones, or inappropriate items or behavior.  All school rules will be followed in class.

 

I look forward to an enjoyable and educationally challenging year with all of you!

ERWC Essay 6-Point Rubric Scale:

General 5-Point Rubric Scale:

E6:     100%  

E5/6: 95%

E5:     90%

E4/5: 85%

E4:     80%

E3/4: 75%

E3:     70%

E2/3: 65%

E2:     60%

E1/2: 55%

E1:     45%

E1-:    35%

R5+:  100%

R5:      95%

R4/5:  90%

R4:      85%

R3/4:  80%

R3:      75%

R2/3:  70%

R2:      65%

R1/2:  55%

R1:      45%

R1-:     35%


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Past Assignments

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Back to the Wild documentary: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eR98wPYYqhc
 
NPR interview: What really happened to Chris McCandless? Link to audio: http://www.npr.org/player/v2/mediaPlayer.html?action=1&t=1&islist=false&id=222172599&m=222183674
 

http://youtu.be/eR98wPYYqhc     Back to the Wild documentary


http://youtu.be/iWYRaZ23F4g  Carrine McCandless


http://youtu.be/6i8RJXBDVTo       Book Circle Online interview with Carrine McCandless


http://youtu.be/1FQCIVh8kYw     20/20 Family Secrets  expose on McCandless
 
+ transcript is attached

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  • Into the Wild film (148 min)
     
    Objective: SWBAT compare & contrast the characterization and motivations of McCandless as portrayed in the film and the text
     
    EQ: How is the portrayal of McCandless different in the film vs. the texts that we read?
     
    Double Bubble: Into the Wild Film/Text
     
    Compare/Contrast McCandless' motivations and portrayal
     
    Day 1 (Tuesday): ~ 50 minutes
    Day 2: (FinalsDay) ~ 90 minutes
     
    If needed: Complete the film on Day 3 (first day of new sem)  + share Krakauer's 2013 
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Objective: Understand what motivated McCandless by paraphrasing Transcendentalists' beliefs and collaboratively read, analyze, evaluate, and literary excerpts that influenced McCandless.
 
Skipped this year
 
 
* 25 Min: Groups: Analyze + evaluate excerpts from one of the authors who influenced McCandless influences: (Tolstoy, Davies, and Thoreau) -- find relevant quotes to back up your responses.
*10 Min: Share your findings with the class.
 
Hand in your team's response
 
 
** If you were absent, please see the attached document for the assignment.  You should complete Parts I & II for ONE of the three authors (Davies, Tolstoy, or Thoreau)

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"Cult" Day 3: Socratic Seminar
 
Day 3: Socratic Seminars (Pilot/co-pilots with sticky notes to contribute plus 3 rotations): Respond to the Socratic questions plus add your own.
 
* Reflection

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"Cult" Day 2
* List of students writing the essay + overview of prompt (Chris noble/courageous?  or ignorant/foolish?)
 
Day 2: 12 min: Complete written response to the questions. 12 min. (3 minutes each): share your summary with your team. Point out key ideas in the text that they need to know. 25 min: Prepare for the Socratic Seminar by reading the questions and jotting down your answers. Add questions you have that I didn't include. (HW: Read the rest of the article if you have not yet so you will be informed for Socratic Seminar).

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1/27-1/29 The Cult of Chris McCandless: 3 days including Socratic Seminar
 
The Cult of Chris McCandless: Instructions (3 days)--text, questions,and Soc Sem questions posted on Google Classroom:

Day 1: Read your assigned section of the attached document carefully and begin responding to the questions. This time I want you to respond to the text by hand. (HW: Read the rest of the article so you will be informed on Friday)

Day 2: 12 min: Complete written response to the questions. 12 min. (3 minutes each): share your summary with your team. Point out key ideas in the text that they need to know. 25 min: Prepare for the Socratic Seminar by reading the questions and jotting down your answers. Add questions you have that I didn't include. (HW: Read the rest of the article if you have not yet so you will be informed for Socratic Seminar).

Day 3: Socratic Seminars (Pilot/co-pilots with sticky notes to contribute plus 3 rotations): Respond to the Socratic questions plus add your own.
 
 

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  • ITW Final
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Final Study Guide: Coffeehouse Review
 
* Overview of coffeehouse steps and goals (PPT)
* Count off 1-5 to create teams of 5 to 6 students.  Collaborate and dig though your text to answer questions and create coffeehouse poster
* Last 15 min of class: rotate to take notes from coffeehouse posters to prep for final
* HW: Study for your final exam

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* Photos from Chris' last days (PPT)
* Epilogue--I will read aloud
* Self-directed study:
1. Read!  If you have not yet finished the text, now is your chance
2. Write: If you have not yet completed Ch. 13-18 dialectical journals, now is your chance (If you are handwriting your response, your journal is due by the end of the period)
3. Prep for final: Study guide is posted on Google Classroom.  If you have completed all other work, take this time to study
 
* HW: Ch. 13-18 Dialectical Journals due to Google Classroom no later than Saturday 11:59 p.m. 
 
>> Note: If you are responding by hand, journals are due by the end of the period today
 
 

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Wed-Thur Ch. 17-18 plus epilogue

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Obj:SWBAT deepen understanding of the text events and predicted outcomes by engaging in World Cafe discussions
 
* Ch. 16 World Cafe (see attached): Count off 1-6
* Present question types (OTS, UTS, and Evaluation)
* Create a 6-square foldable to record answers to OTS questions
* Teams engage in World Cafe, select host to remain, rotate (~4x per class)
* HW: Read Ch. 17 and complete dialectical journal
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Obj: SWBAT demonstrate knowledge of text by participating in sticky note review using thinking tools
 
* Ch. 14-15 sticky note review (teams) -- turn in
* No stickies?  Respond in writing to the text-dependent questions and turn in: 
 
  1. Krakauer says that he suffered from hubris, exaggerated pride, in his younger years. How does Chris suffer from hubris?
  2. Why does Krakauer use author intervention in these two chapters? Is it effective?
  3. At the end of chapter 15, Krakauer says that surviving his Alaska adventure was due to chance. Did Chris die because of chance, fate, environment, heredity or other sources? In the author’s note, Krakauer mentions that his opinion about McCandless will be apparent in the novel. What is his opinion?
  4. Do you agree or disagree with Krakauer’s convictions of Chris McCandless? Explain.
* Kick off Ch. 16: "The Alaska Interior"
* HW: Finish reading Ch. 16 to prep for the World Cafe

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Obj: SWBAT deepen understanding of text by collaboratively responding to text-dependent questions 
 
* Teams: All students collaborate and all hands on deck to respond to Ch. 11-13 TDQs: 
  1. What did Chris learn about his family on his first trip across the country and how did this knowledge affect him?
  2. What are some quotes that represent characteristics of Chris's parents?
  3. Compare and Contrast the bond between a mother/son and father/son how are they the same?  Different?
* Teams: Begin Ch. 14-15 reading and sticky note annotation (2 per chapter)
 
* HW: Complete Ch. 14-15 sticky notes to prep for tomorrow + see Google Classroom for survey link (please take the survey to help a classmate)

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* Memory Belt due day
 
Objective: Make a personal connection to the text by creating and presenting a Memory Belt (like McCandless' belt in ITW)
 
* Have belt/project on desk for me to check
* Hand out rubric: Write your name, date, period
* Divide into 5 or 6 groups (count off 1-5 or 1-6)
* Groups form; hand your rubric to the left
* Presenters stand, describe their belt symbol stories; one peer grades while I walk the room to grade
* Turn in rubrics after all have presented
* Volunteers: Share a portion or all of your belt with the class

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I am off-campus (Getty Field trip)
 
Partner sticky-note review
When complete: Write your name on a piece of paper, attach the sticky notes, and turn in to guest teacher 
Work time for Memory Belt

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* Ch. 11 Sticky note review: Hand your sticky note to a partner.  Be sure they can find the quote you referenced and give them time to complete the front of the sticky while you complete the front of theirs
>> Whip-around: Share the icons, quotes, and responses
 
 
* As you read ch. 12-13  write 2 sticky notes for EACH chapter following the attached guidelines
 
~ I will read aloud to start us off.  Keep a sticky handy to place in your book as soon as you find a quote you want to write about (read aloud pp. 117-121 then pause to create first Ch. 12 sticky).  Continue pp 121-end of chapter then create second sticky.
 
~ Do the same for Ch. 13 on your own
 
* Reminder: Memory Belt is due Wednesday

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* Memory Belt: Directions plus samples
  1. read pg. 51 (last paragraph) "An accomplished leatherworker,..."; then , p.68 (par.3) "Alex used to sit...".  
  2. Questions to discuss: Why did Chris make the belt? What did is symbolize or represent to him? Why did he feel a need to explain it to others? What stories does it tell?
  3. Fold a paper into 1/4 so you can create a Memory Belt Outline with 8 images/explanations
  4. Make your own Memory Belt.  Personalize it using whatever materials you choose.  Be sure it has 8 images + be ready to present/explain the stories. Include your past, present, and future. 
  5. This will be due on Wednesday 1/13
* Ch. 11: Sticky note annotation:
 
* Switching things up a bit from the dialectical journal: Sticky note annotation / partner review
 
* PPT/sample
 
* To review Ch. 11: Create a sticky note for the chapter following the attached guidelines
 
 

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* Collect Dialectical Journals (Ch. 8-10)--G. Classroom or handwritten
 
* Ch. 1-10 ITW Quiz
 
* Review/discuss Ch. 8-10
 
* Kick off Ch. 11 (Chris' father)
 
* Memory Belt Assignment:
  1. read pg. 51 (last paragraph) "An accomplished leatherworker,..."; then , p.68 (par.3) "Alex used to sit...".  
  2. Questions to discuss: Why did Chris make the belt? What did is symbolize or represent to him? Why did he feel a need to explain it to others? What stories does it tell?
  3. Fold a paper into 1/4 so you can create a Memory Belt Outline with 8 images/explanations
  4. Make your own Memory Belt.  Personalize it using whatever materials you choose.  Be sure it has 8 images + be ready to present/explain the stories. Include your past, present, and future. 
  Memory Belt due next Wednesday
 

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Obj: Prepare to complete FAFSA + connect the text to your own life by creating a memory belt
  1. (30 min.) FAFSA w/ Counselor 
HW:   Be sure to complete your Ch. 8-10 reading HW + dialectical journal before class tomorrow!  

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Objective: Students will paraphrase a poem and analyze its theme by completing a graphic organizer and sentence frames.
 
 
(Music "Money" Pink Floyd or money money, money)
1. It has been said that "Money makes the world go 'round." Reflect on how this relates to you personally. On a broader scale, does our society allow us to find true happiness and fulfillment without money? (Frame) TPS
2. Connecting poem: Money, O! -- Read alone, 5 students read one stanza each, teacher read; paraphrase each stanza (see attached) #1 = I do, #2 = we do, #3 = partners, #4-5=on your own.
3. Summary/theme (frame) In __'s poem, ___, the message is __. This is important/significant/relevant to today because __.

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* ITW Ch. 1-7 Quiz (G.Class)

* Large team discussion of Ch. 1-7 journals/turn in journals

* Review essay score and commentary (Turnitin)--rewrite opportunity available

* Check your Aeries grade

* Eddie Vedder video (my school website)

* HW: Due Thursday: Ch. 8-10 dialectical journal (quiz Thursday)

 
 
 
Note: Skip this 2016 (but perhaps bring back 2016/17): Read Ch. 8-10 and write 2 sticky notes for each chapter (so 6 total) following the attached guidelines

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Wintermas - Gym [Special Double Assembly Schedule]
P. 0 7:00 - 7:55
P. 1 8:00 - 8:43
P. 2A 8:48 - 9:48 (300's,400's & P.E. go to the gym) Break 9:48 - 9:58 (Gym cleared) P. 2B 10:03 - 11:03(100's, 200's & 500's go to the gym)
P. 3 11:08 - 11:53 (workers get 20 minute clean up in the gym)
Lunch 11:53 - 12:23
P. 4 12:28 - 1:13
P. 5 1:18 - 2:01
P. 6 2:06 - 2:50 
 
(Period 1 is 43 minutes/Period 2 is 1 hour): Finish film and turn in Cornell Notes

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College Panel

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* Questions re: ITW?
* Continue Cornell Notes for Connecting Film: A Christmas Carol
 

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* Into the Wild: 
1. Respond to the Big Questions
  • Does our society allow us to find true happiness and fulfillment? Have you ever felt as though you needed to get away from what you knew in order to learn more about yourself or life in general?
  • What would you do if you felt as though you needed a radical change in your life to find meaning in living? Would you take the chance or would you keep on living the way you always did?
2. Respond to the Author's Note questions:
 
  1. How long did Chris McCandless’ journey in the Alaskan wilderness last?
  2. Immediately after graduating from Emory University in 1990, Chris McCandless dropped out of sight. List 5 things that he did to support his “plan”.
  3. What are some themes Krakauer mentions are the result of his “meandering inquiry”?
  4. What do you think Krakauer means when he states “I won’t claim to be an impartial biographer”?
* Last 15 minutes: Set up Cornell Notes and  Begin Connecting Film (2009 A Christmas Carol)
 

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12/14 to 12/16 + 12/18: Kick off Into the Wild +  Wrap up Value of Life unit with Connecting film: A Christmas Carol (91 min)
 
12/14:
* Late Value of Life packets?
* Any turnitin.com problems?  
>> Reminder: Turn in before you leave campus.  Deadline is 11:59 tonight.
* Student Services: Pick up Into the Wild
>> Introductory slides + author's note
>> Review the dialectical journal (on Google Classroom)
* Last 20 minutes of class: Begin reading the text OR finalize/turn in your essay
 
Head's Up:
Over break: Read Ch. 1-7 and complete dialectical journal (2 quotes per chapter = 14 total quotes).  Left side of journal is for the quote/ right side is for analysis.
 
See attached sample (also posted on Google Classroom)

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Collect Value of Life Writing Packet
* Make sure you are able to login to turnitin.com -- double check before it's too late!
* As needed: Model the document settings again
* Continue Value of Life Essay (see yesterday's agenda)
* Due to turnitin.com by Monday at 11:59 p.m. at the latest.  You may turn it in at any time between now and then.

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 * Return pre-writing
* Model document settings for Value of Life essay (header, title, double space)
* G. Classroom: sample thesis statements (as needed)
* Writing Workshop (today and tomorrow)
* Submit to turnitin.com by 11:59 p.m. Monday 
* HW: Turn in Value of Life packet tomorrow
 
 

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I am out for Norton Simon Field Trip (sub plans)
 
Pre-Writing:
1. Parse the prompt (ABC: A: Do/What, B: Brainstorm, C: Choose order)
2. Draft thesis (I did it for you)
3. Draft topic sentences
4. Select support evidence (flag it in your text)
 
HW: Finalize Value of Life packet and prepare for essay
 
 

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DWA Day

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*Wrap up Steve Jobs' text
* ABC (attack/brainstorm/choose) approach to parsing prompt and preparing to write: http://prezi.com/f_svmmyhe54y/?utm_campaign=share&utm_medium=copy&rc=ex0share​    
 

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Obj: SWBAT explore the concept of the value of life by responding to a quote (writing and TPS) + focused note taking (3 text dependent questions)
 
* Who is Steve Jobs?
* Quickwrite: Response to quote
* Focused Reading/ Note-taking: 3 focused questions
  ~ Copy the questions to your notes, leaving 6 lines for responses
  ~ Collaborative teams: Use these questions to guide your reading
  ~ Write responses in your packet, including textual evidence (quotations)
* Hw: Complete focused first read/response to focused questions
 

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SWBAT explore the idea of assigning a monetary value to life by annotating an essay and responding in writing.
 
* "What is a Life Worth?"  Quickwrite: How much money should your family be paid if you die due to someone else's negligence (carelessness)?  How would you figure the dollar amount?  Is the life of a poor person worth as much as that of a wealthy person?  What is a life worth?
* Share responses (teams>>equity cards)
 
* (Note: Ripley article is NOT in the ERWC readers)
 
* I will summarize the key ideas from Ripley's article
 
* Feinberg's essay: 
1. First read: NPR "This I believe" reading
2. Second read: Partners annotate the essay with a focus on Feinberg's main ideas and values
3. Written response: Discuss Feinberg's change of heart.  Why did he change his mind?  What would he do differently?
 

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*Objective: SWBAT explore multiple perspectives on a text by writing questions from the perspective of Hamlet or Ebert and engaging in Lines of Communication, a whip-around, and a reflection
 
* Add to Table of Contents: Mock Interview + Reflection
* Mock Interview Directions:
   1. I will assign you the role of either Hamlet or Ebert
   2. If you are Ebert, write 3 questions you want to ask Hamlet; If you are Hamlet, write 3 questions you want to ask Ebert
   3. Lines of Communication (outside!): Hamlet against the wall, Ebert facing: Ask and answer 1 question, then shift to do the same, then shift again
 
* Whip-Arounds: Team members share one Q&A that stands out the most in your mind
+ Class Whip-around (selected and volunteer students)
 
* Reflection: Write a short paragraph reflecting on what you can take with you from this experience.  How do you feel about the perspectives of these two men?  What did you learn by viewing these texts from multiple perspectives?
 

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Ebert T-Chart Jigsaw in 3 parts:
 
* Para. 26-30; Para 31-35; Para 36-40 -- Select quotes for your T-chart (left side=quotes/right side=commentary) + whip-around/share out with class
 
* Chart the Text: Roger Ebert (??? maybe)
 

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Roger Ebert article 2nd Reading:  
* Underline words and phrases that express Ebert's views about what it means to be alive
* T-chart: Select 3 of the quotes you underlined, and write them on the left.  On the right, discuss the importance of the quotation
* Turn in T-chart at end of period

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SWBAT predict how a new text will add to the "Value of Life" conversation by surveying the text, building vocab and background knowledge, and writing a connection/prediction statement.
 
* Warmup: Review Rhetorical Appeals from yesterday
* Introductory slides: Ebert before and after cancer + survey the text for cues
* Build background with 2 videos (View 2 short clips: One of Siskel and Ebert at the movies (Jim Carrey's The Mask) and mybigcampus clip discussing Ebert's death) and vocabulary
* View images of Chicago's Loop and El trains + Evian water
* Predict: Write a statement to answer the EQ: What does this text add to the Value of Life conversation?
 
* Begin Ebert article: Targeted first reading (I read to paragraph 12, modeling the exposition); students complete first reading through paragraph 15
* HW: complete through paragraph 15

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SWBAT summarize the primary forms of rhetorical strategies by taking cornell notes and writing a summary paragraph of key ideas with transitions.
 
* Hamlet Reflection & Questions you'd like to ask him
* 2 Videos:

1. Legit: David Tennant - Hamlet's Soliloquy (RSC Hamlet)

2. Funny: Shakespeare Sketch - A Small Rewrite

* Cornell Notes: Rhetorical Appeals

* Write a summary of the key ideas & add transitions 

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Yesterday you read Hamlet’s “To be or not to be” soliloquy yesterday for the first time. Today you will do a second reading to deepen understanding (directions attached)
 
* Review the Hamlet Background 
* Follow the directions for 2nd reading with a highlighter
* Select 3 quotations to paraphrase in writing packets
* Write a response paragraph in writing packets.
 
Frame for response paragraph:
 

         In Hamlet’s soliloquy, it is evident that he is deeply depressed and is in fact contemplating suicide; his only reason to stay alive is his fear of death.  One way Hamlet expresses his distress is when he declares “  “ (ll. x-y).  This reveals… Add 2nd CD to discuss his fear of death.  Add CM to explain.  Wrap up big ideas with CS. 

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* Return, review, and offer rewrites for S.N. essays
* Return Writing packets
 * Kick off Value of Life Unit: Set up packet with 5 pages and table of contents
* Agree or Disagree: Life has no meaning without family -- Philosophical Chairs
* Quickwrite
* 1st Reading of Hamlet with Branagh
 
 

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>> Note: Did not do this in 2015
 
Objective: SWBAT explore the concept of courage by close reading & annotating a text, selecting quotations to determine tone, and writing a response
* Value of Life Pre-Reading: Interpretation & analysis of Chief Joseph's speech (see attached) 
* What is close reading?  What is annotation?  What is it not?
* 1st Reading of Chief Joseph
* Quickwrite
* 2nd Reading of Chief Joseph
* Discussion Qs
* Final thoughts
* TOD

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* Practice the grammar skills we learned yesterday:
1. Review the homework
2. Open notes individual work for handout 2
3. noredink.com quiz for pronouns/antecedents + plurals/possessives
 

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Grammar lesson (reteaching based on recurrent errors found in SN essay): pronoun/antecedent lesson (grammarbytes ppt)
 
* Whole class: respond to ppt questions
* Partners: respond to handout questions
* Individuals: Finish the handout as HW
 
 

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Veteren's Day Holiday :)

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Guest Speaker: Staff Sgt Michael C. Way

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Thur (11/5)-Monday (11/9): determine and evaluate the cause and effect in Hamlet (film) as preview for upcoming Value of Life unit
 
* EQ: What is the value of life?  How is it revealed in this text/film?
 
* While viewing: multi-flow map (cause and effect) for Hamlet's madness

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Social Networking Unit: Closure 
Options: 
 
 Show film The Social Network: money & ego vs. friendship + delve deeper into the origins of the issues involved in our unit
 
 
Or Clips:
 
 
    1. Video clips www.mybigcampus.com Click on "Drive" on the left, then Click on "Bundles", then "Social Networking".

    * The Innovation of Loneliness (4:27)
    * Stuff they don't want you to Know -- Facebook (5:06)
    * The Hijacking of the Mind (11:25) http://mybigcampus.com/library/360897

    * Stop Watching Us- The Video (3:26) http://mybigcampus.com/library/360078

    After videos: Socratic Seminar Questions: What are the consequences of our obsession with social media?  What are we missing out on in life?  Are we losing our honesty as well as our ability to hold a conversation?  What can  we do?

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    Trying to find the videos on youtube...(not sure if these are the same as the above)

The innovation of loneliness: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c6Bkr_udado
Stop watching us--the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aGmiw_rrNxk
Stuff they don't want you to know -- Facebook: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nz3a1wun8RE
 
  • HW: none

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In class timed write: Social Network Unit summative
 
Turn in writing packets and articles along with your essay

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Obj: Formulate a thesis and identify relevant supporting evidence to prepare for an essay by completing a rough draft.
  1. Essay pre-writing outline handout for Timed Write (see attached)
  2. Review rubric (explain grading)

HW: 

  1. Articles + packet due after essay
  2. Timed Write tomorrow

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  •  Since we didn't start with this on Friday due to tech issues...

    1. Youtube video: by Gary Turk "Look Up" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z7dLU6fk9QY&feature=em-share_video_user
    2. Have a conversation: What is the message of the video?  
    3. Practice Integrating quotes: Go to google classroom and open the doc.  We'll walk through the directions together.  Upload your doc once you finish (in class or as HW)

    HW: Finalize your writing packet and annotations (due on Tuesday after essay)

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Obj: SWBAT develop an academic stance on an issue by annotating an article and responding orally.
 
** Collect/stamp paragraphs: "How Recruiters Use" response (stamp all completed/collect only those who have not yet received feedback)
  1. Hook: Hold a conversation with your A/B partner while you look into each other's eyes (30 seconds). Discuss reflections.
  2. Youtube video: by Gary Turk "Look Up" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z7dLU6fk9QY&feature=em-share_video_user
  3. Debrief & write your reflections/evidence from the video.  What is the message of the video?  
  4. "Flight From Conversation" article: Annotate like a Cornell Note
  5. HW: Write response paragraph for "Flight from Conversation"

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* "How Recruiters Use..." 

  • Read with purpose: Annotate claims and evaluate evidence (L: Ask questions/R: Take notes)
  • Write expository body paragraph using the frame:

                In the article (“title"), (Author) asserts/ claims... The strongest evidence to back his assertion includes the idea that "..."  This demonstrates/ shows/ reveals … (Author) further supports his claim by discussing the fact that “…”  This supports his primary claim by demonstrating/ revealing/ establishing…  Ultimately, …

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Obj: SWBAT identify the Big Idea and key evidence in the article "Bullied to Death" by reading, and annotating in Cornell Note styl
 
* Turn in completed Ham paragraph for credit and feedback
* While I give feedback on your responses, you will ...
 
 
     * Read  and annotate "Bullied to Death" 
     * Focus on the Big Ideas and evidence presented--Look for author BIAS.  Does she back up her claims with evidence?  
     * Write a 2-3 sentence summary of Big Ideas in your packet
 
 
 
*HW: Complete the annotations & summary if not completed in class

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Obj: SWBAT apply proper structure to a written response to text by taking notes on essay types (expository/argumentative) & structure (intro/body/conclusion) and writing a framed body paragraph for an expository essay.
 
* Take notes on essay types and structure with a focus on the body paragraph structure (See attached pictures--I shot pics from the board as I outlined.I also attached the PPT with body paragraph notes + frame, and finally a doc that outlines essay essentials).
* Get out your T-chart
* Writing prompt for body paragraph: What are the advantages and disadvantages of social networking as Ham describes them?
* Write your body paragraph following the format that we noted.  Use the frame for extra support.  
 

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* Social Networking Unit:"We Shall Overshare"
>> Complete vocab whip-around
>> Second reading: Annotate as follows:
     * Ask questions (left margin)
     * Make comments/note main ideas (right margin)
     * Add icons for things like big ideas, conflicts, trends, unanswered Qs, etc.
>> Make a T-chart listing the positive and negative attributes of social networking, according to Ham
 

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SWABT identify and define challenging vocabulary in order to understand big ideas by collaborating to define words from an article (1st reading)
 
 
* Social Networking Unit: "We Shall Overshare"
* First read: circle challenging vocab
* Share out with class
* Divide and conquer: Students define vocabulary
* Share on Elmo

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Obj: SWBAT develop understanding of the complexities of Social Networking by viewing various perspectives (video clips) and writing/sharing responses.
 
* Social Networking Unit:
* Set up packet with Table of Contents and 4+ pages
 
1. 4 minute video (it is a marketing video that discusses the size and reach of social media sites)
 
>> After the video: Which statistics were particularly surprising or meaningful? Share out reactions and questions. 
 
2. This Video discusses the effects of social media on pre-teens and their diminishing ability to feel empathy.
>> Again, discussion and reactions.
 
 
3. This is the Amanda Todd video: 8 minutes long
 
After the three videos: Social Networking PPT: think write pair share and whip around for the following prompt:
 

QuickWrite: In what ways are social media like Facebook, Instagram, Tumblr, Snapchat,Twitter, and others transforming our lives?  What is their impact (positive and negative) on how we live our lives?

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* Open Google Classroom to view  scores and comments on MLA FAQ Research  Paper
* Create account at turnitin.com:
 
Turnitin.com
 
Period 1 Class ID: 10972628
Password:  erwc1
 
 
Period 2 Class ID: 10972666
Password: erwc2
 
* Make all necessary changes/fixes/revisions to your document.  Note: Just because I marked only 1 paragraph does NOT mean that the errors appear only in that paragraph.  Revise ALL work and ALL formatting as directed (see the model!)
 
* Submit to turnitin.com by Monday 
 
* See me in HW Central in the library  on Wednesday between 3:00-8:00 p.m.
 
* Social Networking Unit: Set up Table of Contents
* Begin videos and responses (see tomorrow's hw for the links)

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* Collect S-V agreement quiz (handout)/stamp/review at end of period if time
 
* noredink.com: login and set up account (note: do NOT use your .net account for this)
 
Period 1 code: m7cd8me8
Period 2 code: 9x7vv3f3
 
 
* S-V agreement quiz on noredink
* Parenthetical citation quiz on noredink
 
* Also: Check googleclassroom for your MLA FAQ results.  Rewrite by meeting with me on Wednesday in the computer lab
>> All rewrites must be turned in to turnitin.com
>> Rewrite deadline Monday 10/26

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SWBAT identify and apply correct subject-verb agreement by taking notes and practicing with sample sentences
 
* Note: This was supposed to take place last Wednesday/Thursday, but due to sub mayhem nothing happened on those days
 
* Grammar Bites PPT: S-V agreement
* Take notes on specific challenges
* Whole class practice
* Paired practice
* HW: Continue to practice on the S-V agreement quiz handout (we'll review tomorrow)

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* I'm out for a conference (Wed-Fri)
* Career Research World Cafe
* Turn in your rubric at the end of the period

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* I'm out for a conference (Wed-Fri)
 
Today: Subject/Verb agreement "quiz" for review

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* I'm out for a conference (Wed-Fri)
* Short periods today: 20 minutes each (PSAT + Senior Symposium)
 
Subject/Verb Agreement Lesson (PPT)

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* Career Teams: Create a Google Presentation
* Decide: 1. Order of presentation
                 2. Specifically what each person will present
 
* Requirements: 
1. Cover slide that encompasses the careers represented in your group
2. 2+ slides per team member.  The topics should be those you learned from your career research.  If you have only 2 team members: 3 slides each + cover slide
3. Work together to ensure that you are not repeating the same info as a team member
4. Each slide must include a relevant picture, graph, or other image
5. Must be informative
6. Check grammar, spelling, and capitalization.  Important!
 
 
* One team member for each team will turn in the team presentation to google classroom
 
* Presentations will be on Friday (World Cafe)

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5 minutes: counselor visits 
Rallycap college planning guest speaker (Shannon Barteau)
 
Reminder: FAQ due to Google Classroom by 11:59 tonight!  Don't "share" it with me...Turn it IN to Google Classroom!  
 
>> click on the assignment on G. Classroom
>> click "add"
>> select your completed document
>> click turn in and confirm

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Last day for in-class work on MLA Research FAQ doc
 
* Additional resources: Careers in Focus books from library
* 1:1 help
* Check the linked rubric!  Make sure you get "yes" for all categories so you earn an A!

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College Rep presentation: Why College?  (Kira Magruder)

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  •  
    Obj: SWBAT research their future career by drafting 3 open-ended questions, researching from credible sources (on-line and in books) and writing research findings in an MLA doc.
     
    * Turn in writing packet (make sure you transfer your 3 questions first)
    * Quick review: The assignment, the rubric, Easybib, Citation Machine
    * Research focus: FAQ for your career
    >> MLA format is required
    >> As you research, track ALL sources used: Use Easybib to generate citation + parenthetical citation)
    >> No straight copy paste: Integrate with your words
     
    * Have open: 
    >> Sample doc from Google Classroom (save as P2_ MLACareername_Last name)
    >> Easybib.com and/or Citationmachine.net (or other MLA citation maker)
    >> Multiple research sites + texts

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  • Oct 5-6 and Oct 8  (this Summative assignment is due to Google Classroom on October 9 by 11:59 pm)
     
    Obj: SWBAT research their future career by drafting 3 open-ended questions, researching from credible sources (on-line and in books) and writing research findings in an MLA doc.
     
    * Turn in writing packet (make sure you transfer your 3 questions first)
    * Quick review: The assignment, the rubric, Easybib
    * Research focus: FAQ for your career
    >> MLA format is required
    >> As you research, track ALL sources used: Use Easybib to generate citation + parenthetical citation)
    >> No straight copy paste: Integrate with your words
     
    * Have open: 
    >> Sample word doc (save as P2_ MLACareername_Last name)
    >> Easybib.com
    >> Multiple research sites + texts
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* Begin FAQ research:
 
1. Reminder: Your 3 research questions must be OPEN (must be narrative, not merely a number or statistic) and must be RESEARCHABLE-- glean ideas from p. 23 of ERWC reader
2. Overview of Easybib & Citation Machine
3. Overview of creating Works Cited

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Preparing for research:
 
1. Visit CACareerzone.org again. See our Google Class: Explore your work interests more deeply with the Work Importance Profiler (first link) and find out how much money you will need with the Money Choices questionnaire (second link).
 
2. Write 3+ research questions about your career.  Make sure they are OPEN-ended questions.
 
Avoid closed questions such as this: What is the average income for this position?
Write open questions instead such as this: What kind of preparation do I need for this position?

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* Stamp "Why go to College" if annotated/summarized
 ~ Whip around share of big ideas
* "10 Most Common Excuses for NOT going to College..." 
~ I will read intro/set the stage
~ Partners switch back and forth for Excuse 1-10, pausing to discuss and annotate
~ Write summary at the end
~ Share out most relevant excuses
 
* HW: FAQ Guide for College or Work (pp. 21-23)


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* Stamp "Not going to College" if annotated and summarized
* Big Idea discussion
* How much do you want success:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GLcJHC9J7l4
 
 
 

Take notes on ideas that resonate with you as you watch the video

Write a 3-4 sentence response to the video: What insights did you gain?  Did you recognize yourself in anything he said?  How can you apply these ideas to your own life?

Discuss the big ideas with team

 

* Begin:  "Why Go to College?" article (pp. 13-18 including charts/graphs): read/annotate/summarize (complete as HW)

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* Analytical Response Paragraph: Graff's "Hidden Intellectualism": Make a copy of the frame uploaded for you on Google Classroom.  Use the frame, or at least the format of the frame, to write your response.
 
>> 21 minutes on the timer: Turn in to google classroom
 
* Video Clip: Famous Failures: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zLYECIjmnQs
 
>> talk with your teammates about the insights we can gain and how it can apply to our lives
>> TOD: write your response
 
* HW: Read, annotate, and summarize "Not Going to College is a Viable Option" (pp 11-2).  I will check tomorrow!

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* Stamp completed "Hidden Intellectualism" articles (annotations + summaries on all pages)
 
* Teams: Each person share a summary of one page
* Equity cards to share with class
* Explore your career interests with Interest Profiler -- Link is also on Google Classroom (CACareerzone.org): http://www.cacareerzone.org/ip/
* Explore career profiles once you complete the interest inventory--this will be key when we begin our research/FAQ
 
* Also see link to Wall Street Journal salary outlook by major
 

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Assignment

Counselor Visit: College timeline: Chromebooks + mark key dates in agendas
 
Reminder: "Hidden Intellectualism" article is due tomorrow: read, annotate, and write a summary at the bottom of each page.  Stamp + review tomorrow.

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SWBAT apply first reading strategies of understanding key vocabulary and interacting with the text
 
* Understand key vocab: "Hidden Intellectualism"
~ Words will be assigned to each group:
   1. Define in context (annotate the text)
   2. Look up/ask for help when needed
   3. Share your findings with the class
 
* First reading: Scan 1st/last paragraphs to get big idea
~ Discuss: How challenging will this text be?  How do you know?
~ Read with a pen in your hand, annotating the text as you go
~ Pause at the end of each page to clarify and summarize
 
* HW: Complete the article by FRIDAY: read, annotate, and summarize each page. I will stamp completed work and we will review it together Friday.

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SWBAT: engage in meaningful discussions about a text by responding to text-dependent questions (TDQs) and connecting with personal experiences
 
* Stamp personal response paragraphs: A time you were less than perfect, how did you overcome it?  What did you learn about yourself?
* Teams: Share your paragraphs and provide feedback: 1. How effective was the paragraph?  2. How did it affect you?
* 1-2 volunteers share out with class
* Article: "10 Rules for Going to College when Nobody Really Expected you To": 
~ Preview TDQs
~ Read with partner: lightly annotate key ideas/advice that you want to remember and pause after paragraph 2, 3, 9, and 11 to respond to the TDQs
 
* Whip-around: meaningful advice

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SWBAT apply second reading strategies to the text by identifying and reflecting on key advice plus writing a personal response
 
* Perez article 2nd reading: Teams (see Google classroom for doc)
   1. Be sure that your team has fully responded to Q1-4, including well-integrated quotations for #1 and #3. (if you didn't finish on Friday)
   2. Blend your four answers into a body paragraph.  Add a TS and CS (write this under the 4 questions)
   3. Second read: Place checkmark next to best advice
   4. ID key advice and add reflection (t-chart on Google doc)
>> Submit to Google classroom when complete (1 per team)
 
* Individuals (finish as HW): In your PACKET (not on google doc): Write personal response paragraph to respond to prompt: 

Write a one paragraph description of an event or moment when you were less than perfect.  What did you learn from it?  How did you pick yourself back up?  What does this event, and your response to it, reveal about your character traits?  

 

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* Discuss procedures for checking out/in Chromebooks
* Team up: 1 person pick up chromebooks for the team
* Log in (I will help those who don't know how) + Sign into Google Classroom:
     Per 1 Code:  to22pkx          Per 2 Code: zrhq1pf
 
 
* 1 person from each team: Create a Document, change the file name, to include all 4 teammate names,  and share the file with your team. At the end of the period, one person from each team upload the doc to Google Classroom
      
 

* Answer the following 4 questions about the text.  Include a relevant quote where you see –Q-

  1. Why are students afraid to take risks? –Q-

 Frame: According to Perez, students are afraid to take risks because “___” (Perez par 3).

  1. Why are mistakes ok? TS + Commentary
  2. According to the article, why do colleges like seeing mistakes? –Q-
  3. What is the overall message? Commentary
 
 
* Now take your 4 responses and transform them into a body paragraph, starting with the following TS: 
     Failure is considered to be a necessary component to a successful life.  Add responses to Q1, Q2, Q3, and Q4

** Add transitions to make the paragraph logical.

 

Upload this doc to Google Classroom Perez Article Assignment (1 member per team)

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  1. Hand out "books" class + set a purpose for reading
  2. Begin first article.  1st reading of "Want to Succeed? Learn to Fail" by Perez (looking for icons, Questions on left, Reactions/Comments on right, underline important things).
HW: Complete annotations on Perez article

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* First 20 minutes: Mrs. Jefferson visiting all classes re: expectations
 

* Making predictions and asking questions (based on words selected/generated yesterday)

  1. Reflect: What do your words tell you about your opinion of yourself in terms of readiness for work or college?
  2. Predict how well your descriptive words will work for you as you move into the next stage of your life. 

EX: Being stubborn can work for or against you, but being angry is something you need to work on (no one wants to hire or work with an angry person).

 

HW:  Discuss yourself with someone you trust:

  1. Start by asking them to describe you.  Not your looks, but your personality traits and qualities as a human being. 
  2. Don’t argue, just listen! Take notes about what they say, not what you think. 
  3. Next, share the words you chose and get their reactions.  Write down their reactions and bring them to class tomorrow. 

 REMEMBER: It is difficult to represent yourself well if you don’t have a fairly solid sense of who you are or what you believe about yourself. 

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Objective: SWBAT self-assess readiness for what's next after high school by responding to a quick write and a whole-class whip-around
 
 
* Overview of the unit: "What's Next? Life After High School"
* Quickwrite: Write about your plans for next year and beyond.  Consider how well-prepared you are for the next stage of your life and begin to develop plans for making your plan a reality.
Frame: I am (well-prepared/moderately prepared/unprepared) for life after high school; my plan is ___.  (Follow up your topic sentence with examples and commentary/reasons.  Your paragraph should be 7-8 sentences: TS, CD,CMx2, CD, CMx2, CS)
 
* Write questions: What do you need to find out?  List questions you need the answer to.
 
Whole-class whip around using frame 
 
* Select 10 descriptive words from the list (attached) and come up with 10 more on your own.  
* Rank the words (highest to lowest importance)

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Obj: SWBAT interpret the big idea of a video by taking notes, discussing, and writing a reflection with frame & sharing with a whip-around
 
* Set up "What's Next: Life after High School" packet (4-5 pages)
* Table of contents: Item 1 = Notes from Will Smith video + Reflection
 
* Anticipatory Set: Discuss this quote from Confucius: He who says he can, and he who says he can't, are both right.  What does this mean?  How can it be true?  How does it apply to you?
 
 ~ Take notes on his big ideas
* A/B partners discuss: How does he define success?  Share your notes
* Thinking Tools: Apply the thinking tool icons to your notes
* Equity cards: Share big ideas (5 students) + other ideas/icons (5 students)
* Reflection: How can this apply to your life?
     >> Frame: The ideas in this video can apply to my life (based on / because) ___.  The first idea I find important is  ___ because (apply to your own life/goals).  The second idea that I find relevant is  ___  because (apply to your own life/goals).  Overall, (big picture: How can the ideas in this video influence your success?)
 *Whip-around with equity cards: Share your reflections
 
*** See attached doc for updated lesson for next year***
 

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Obj: SWBAT articulate personal traits and values by presenting I Am poems + apply Thinking Tools by interviewing classmates
 
* Agenda:
 
* Alliterative Equity Cards
 
* I Am Poems: Share in groups of 6 + lucky students share with class/ all students turn in
 
* Thinking Tools:
   ~ Quick review (handout)
   ~ Interview a classmate to learn 5+ things about them (such as patterns, details, moral values, contradictions, etc.)

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Assignment

Obj: SWBAT reflect on strengths & weaknesses as a reader & writer to set goals for ERWC learning objectives by responding to prompts and completing a TOD
  1. Hand out Student Response Discussion Frames (see attached)
  2. What is ERWC: Expository Reading and Writing Course (why no book or benchmarks, lots of writing!)
  3. Reflective questions: bullet/jot responses and discuss with A/B partners + class sharing w/index cards
  4. TOD response
HW: Get supplies by Friday + create personalized "I Am" poem by Friday

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Assignment

* Hand slip of paper to me on the way in the door (yesterday's HW)
* Student Demo of HW Site
* Give 1/Get 1 Introduction activity (attached)
* My I Am poem (your personalized version due Friday)
* HW: I Am poems are due Friday!
 

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Assignment

Obj: SWBAT articulate course expectations & outcomes by annotating syllabus/ class norms and whip-around.
 
First Day PPT
  1. Alphabetical Order with locators by last name by the end of the song (I will give you a few hints to get started)
  2. While I sign locators...
    1. Read front page of syllabus on your own (attached)
    2. Pairs: annotate big ideas, unanswered questions, and values/standards
    3. Whip-around
  3. Show Homework Site, how to subscribe, tour of room
  4. Explain class norms (bathroom/borrowing materials- leave ID, raising hands vs. open discussion). 
  5. Introduce "I Am" poems: Project outline + share student samples (Due Friday)
  6. Closure: Review norms by calling on random students
HW:
  1. Carefully read and sign syllabus with your parents (due no later than Friday)
  2. Write your first and last name on a small scrap of paper along with the correct code: 
    • Last Name A-D, your code is Academic
    • Last Name E-L, your code is Educated
    • Last Name M-R, your code is Motivated
    • Last Name S-Z, your code is Scholarly
  3. Personalized I Am poem is due on Friday! (no late work!)